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Pro and con essay about "The struggle for Beauty"

In our world nearly everyone strives for perfection and we have a lot of opportunities to become "perfect".
We can undergo plastic surgery, use artificial light to tan our skin, starve to lose weight. All this only because we are so obsessed with what we want to be that we don't want to know who we really are. So in fact we don't think about our personality.

First the positive aspects of making use of surgery, diets or fashion.
Fashion is a good thing because if you see a person the first time, you can see at first the clothes of someone. It's necessary that you are well-groomed and wear proper clothes if you work in public. So it's important that you are well-dressed and maybe have clothes of the latest fashion.
Diets are okay if they are good for your health. So maybe a doctor will say that you need a diet. Then it's a good thing because you have to do this for your health. That's why some plastic surgery can be good. In this case surgery can be good. Or if you have had an accident or you have terrible scars you will need surgery only because in our society it's important to look "normal" for example to get a job.

Now to the negative aspechts of the struggle for beauty.
In our society a lot of people want to look like the Hollywood-Stars and that's why they starve to lose weight, especially teenagers. And that's definitely no healthy diet if you are 1,60m and to weight 80 pounds. A lot of people undergo plastic surgery only because they want to look perfect no matter what they are going to correct, like the nose, the chin, breasts or maybe it's more that one part of the body.

So at the end of this essay I want you to present my attitude to the struggle of beauty.
In my opinion beauty is important but not as important as someones personality. I think it's alarming that even teenagers want to look like the stars on Tv, such as Paris Hilton. So they will get anorexic, want to dye their hair blond, etc. Such bad examples aren't really exemplary. Everyone should have the right to decide by themselves if someone wants to undergo plastic surgery or not. But if you go over the top and want to make everything "new" the surgeon should say "stop!".
Our society should care more about the topic plastic surgery and they should take care of the children who want to undergo one. The struggle for Beauty can be very dangerous for everyone.